The Necro-Lord

The novel is EXTREMELY good so far and it has quite abit of thought and planning put into it which is really nice to see.

A COMPETENT MC just going to put it there for anyone skimming, but it's true a diamond we have found. He is very smart (IQ wise and tactical smart) and somewhat just just following commands at the beginning but once he cut his own strings he became very competent and can see when something is weird and acts on it usually. also he is a Chaotic type he likes fighting and killing but he's not butchering people he's just like Doomguy just really annoyed at death.

now the world building is really nice and well put together so you can imagine yourself in those areas and how they would feel like.

the characters are awesome especially how they come to be, it makes it so you really understand and feel for those characters.

Light Spoilers

The Good Stuff:

For an author that has mysteriously appeared from the mists of the real world, Necro-Lord is impressive, it quickly throws us into the action, and although it appears perhaps quick-paced in the beginning it alludes to a bigger mystery for later in the story.

The story itself seems well set up for a longer plot line that could turn this into a progression fantasy similar to Primal Hunter or Azeraith Healer.

Room for some tasty, tasty character progression (or MC is just a dick sometimes)

My Big Ol' Nose also smells some village/kingdom building later down the track (MUCH later, I might be wrong tho)

The Not-So-Good-Stuff:

Some character interactions definitely feel... weird but that might just be me.

Grammarly definitely cleared up what was a bit of a mess of mistakes, still a little work to be done.

Worldbuilding needs some work.

With some love and care, this has the potential to be something GREAT

Disclaimer: Apologies for bad grammar or spelling I am still in school and failing English

I will start off saying Im a terrible critic since if i dont like something i just stop reading and move on, so there are rarely bad reviews. So far I've taken this story for exactly what it is, fun entertainment.  I dont expect a polished piece or the next blockbuster.  I just want to spend time outside of reality and enjoying my time.  This book provides that.  Are there different directions that i would have gone or interactions between characters I would have done different? Sure, but im not the one writing and I have no idea whats going to happen next.  So if you want to just relax and enjoy a good book then i recommend this one.